Poem 4

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Strengths: good detail and description. great title because it describes the poem "angel". The poem talks about an angel helping another person, that is not named, and that is in need of help and needs love. The angel also wants to help and wants to give love to this other person, and she asks this other person if she can be his/her angel.





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Rating (1-10): 9


Overall Analysis: great poem !





Poem 3

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Strengths: nice description and detail in the poem, "cover to cover". The title parallels with the poem, and I like that. She talks in the 3rd person in the poem. The poem is about a book, but she talks as if it is a lover. Good beginning to end. Nice topic.





Weaknesses: good description and detail, but should have had more.






Rating (1-10): 8


Overall Analysis: More detail and description but over all it is a great poem.





poem 2

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Strengths: good description and words in the poem, " Making Room". Good title and topic.





Weaknesses: more content. Nice title, but it doesnt describe anything from the poem.






Rating (1-10): 6


Overall Analysis: needs more content and work





poem 1

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Strengths: " I see by the light" is a perfect name for the poem because the poem reflects on that. the poem is short and sweet. The poem keeps the reader wondering what the "certain things" are.





Weaknesses: cursing in the poem.






Rating (1-10): 7


Overall Analysis: the poem needs more work, but like the topic.