poem 2

poet's name/alias:
pbr url: http://www.poetryblogrankings.com/members/poet_home.aspx?pun=amanda_joy1970


Strengths: good description and words in the poem, " Making Room". Good title and topic.





Weaknesses: more content. Nice title, but it doesnt describe anything from the poem.






Rating (1-10): 6


Overall Analysis: needs more content and work