poem 1

poet's name/alias:
pbr url: http://www.poetryblogrankings.com/members/poet_home.aspx?pun=klumpkin


Strengths: " I see by the light" is a perfect name for the poem because the poem reflects on that. the poem is short and sweet. The poem keeps the reader wondering what the "certain things" are.





Weaknesses: cursing in the poem.






Rating (1-10): 7


Overall Analysis: the poem needs more work, but like the topic.